Is there any way we can shorten that quote? Its longer than the article! -- DarkJedi613(Talk) 22:52, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
If there's an idea you have for it, please have at it. I put it up because I think that moment has a lot of meaning in the few passages it has. It is quite long though. I tried taking certain parts out before putting it up but then it started to not make a lot of sense so i just put the whole thing up. Mafalda Hopkirk 22:58, 22 October 2007 (UTC)
What about this:
""Moste Potente Potions?" she repeated suspiciously. Madam Pince held the note up to the light, as though determined to detect a forgery, but it passed the test. She stalked away between the lofty shelves and returned several minutes later carrying a large and moldy-looking book."