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'''Promoted nomination''':
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===[[Peter Pettigrew]]===
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*'''Nominator:''' [[User:Thorning|Thorning]]
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*'''Nomination comments:''' Very well written
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====(1 Unspeakables/13 Users/14 Total)====
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'''Support'''
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#<s>--[[User:Thorning|<font face="Arial Unicode MS" size="4" color="Black" >ƃuıuɹoɥʇ</font>]]<sup>([[User talk:Thorning|<font face="High Tower Text" size="1" color="Green">Send me an owl</font>]])</sup> 16:46, December 23, 2009 (UTC)</s>
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#--[[User:Lord Voldemort killed the vampire James|<span style="color:black">''L.V.K.T.V.J.''</span>]][[File:Hogwarts.jpg|20px]]<sup>([[User talk:Lord Voldemort killed the vampire James|<span style="color:red">'''''Send an owl!'''''</span>]])</sup> 20:29, February 21, 2010 (UTC)
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#--[[User:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Times" size="4" color="Black" >JKoch</font>]][[File:Ravenclawcrest.jpg|20px]]<sup>([[User talk:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Monotype Corsiva" size="1" color="Red">Owl Me!</font>]])</sup> 16:58, April 18, 2010 (UTC)
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#--[[User:Wizard44|Wizard44]] 16:49 May 27,2010 (UTC)
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#--[[User:Joeworthy|Joeworthy]] 21:02, May 28, 2010 (UTC)
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#--[[User:El Profeta Vespertino|El Profeta Vespertino]] 22:10, June 20, 2010 (UTC)
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#:<s>--[[User:Lord David|Lord David]] 23:40, June 30, 2010 (UTC)</s>
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#--[[User:Margiechocoholic|<b><span style="color:Gold">Margiechocoholic</span></b>]] [[File:Medieval_Broomstick.jpg|45px]] [[User talk:Margiechocoholic|<sup><span style="color:purple">Owl me!</span></sup>]] 13:10, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
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#--[[User:EmmyG|<span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:#a46582;">Emmy</span>]] ([[User talk:EmmyG|★]]) 19:49, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
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#--[[User:Rodolphus|Rodolphus]] 11:07, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
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#[[User:Happychickenvermin|<font face="Comic Sans MS" size="4" color="#4876FF">Happychickenvermin!!!</font>]]
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#{{Unvote}} No objections. All commenting users have voted in support. - [[User:Nick O'Demus|<font face="Monotype Corsiva" size="4" color="FF8000">Nick O'Demus</font>]] 11:15, October 19, 2010 (UTC)
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#[[User:XxScurryxX|XxScurryxX]] 20:47, February 21, 2011 (UTC)
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#<sub>—</sub>[[File:German eagle logo.Png|31px]] [[User:Firefox1095|<font face="Vivaldi" size="4" color="Black">&nbsp;Firefox1095&nbsp;</font>]] [[File:German eagle logo.Png|31px]]<sub>—</sub> 02:40, April 24, 2011 (UTC)
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#<span>[[User:*Ginny*|<span style="size:large;color:#330066;">'''*Ginny*'''</span>]]</span><sup>[[User talk:*Ginny*|<span style="color:#660066;">'''(Point Me!)'''</span>]]</sup> 01:01, May 20, 2011 (UTC)
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'''Object'''
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'''Comments'''
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*This needs considerable work. In five minutes I have seen a dozen errors in grammar, poor wording, and british spelling. --[[User:Hcoknhoj|Hcoknhoj]] 08:24, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
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**After making nearly 200 changes, it is at least grammatically correct and has improved continuity and storytelling. --[[User:Hcoknhoj|Hcoknhoj]] 23:53, January 29, 2010 (UTC)
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***Anyone want to look through this one after me? --[[User:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Times" size="4" color="Black" >JKoch</font>]][[File:Ravenclawcrest.jpg|20px]]<sup>([[User talk:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Monotype Corsiva" size="1" color="Red">Owl Me!</font>]])</sup> 00:10, February 17, 2010 (UTC)
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****Get rid of the references in the introduction. It is a good article besides that.--[[User:Lord Voldemort killed the vampire James|<span style="color:black">''L.V.K.T.V.J.''</span>]][[File:Hogwarts.jpg|20px]]<sup>([[User talk:Lord Voldemort killed the vampire James|<span style="color:red">''Send an owl!''</span>]])</sup> 00:26, February 17, 2010 (UTC)
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*****Reading just the Behind the Scenes section, I feel that this article may violate the Neutral Point of View Policy, e. g. Peter was untalented. McGonagall and Lupin claimed it, but it´s not true, as revealed by reading the books and the Magical abilities section.--[[User:Rodolphus|Rodolphus]] 15:42, February 23, 2010 (UTC)
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*****You said Behind the Scenes. I'll take a look at it. --[[User:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Times" size="4" color="Black" >JKoch</font>]][[File:Ravenclawcrest.jpg|20px]]<sup>([[User talk:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Monotype Corsiva" size="1" color="Red">Owl Me!</font>]])</sup> 15:49, February 23, 2010 (UTC)
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*Nowhere does it say that. Throughout the article it says things such as, "Despite being called ____, he was actually _____." It shows up at least three times in the Article. --[[User:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Times" size="4" color="Black" >JKoch</font>]][[File:Ravenclawcrest.jpg|20px]]<sup>([[User talk:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Monotype Corsiva" size="1" color="Red">Owl Me!</font>]])</sup> 15:56, February 23, 2010 (UTC)
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****** The last point of BTS says: Wormtail is reciprocal of Severus Snape: '''Wormtail''' is a Gryffindor who '''is cowardly, disloyal, untalented''', friend of the Marauders but disrespected by the Voldemort, while Snape is a Slytherin who is brave, loyal, talented, enemy of the Marauders but respected by Voldemort. Also, in their school years, Wormtail took pleasure in bullying Snape, while in their adulthood, Snape bullied Wormtail. Emphasis was added by me. It makes Snape sond like the best man ever. How can we fix it?--[[User:Rodolphus|Rodolphus]] 16:21, February 23, 2010 (UTC)
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*We strike it for now. It is an unnecessary comparison as they are already compared above. --[[User:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Times" size="4" color="Black" >JKoch</font>]][[File:Ravenclawcrest.jpg|20px]]<sup>([[User talk:Hcoknhoj|<font face="Monotype Corsiva" size="1" color="Red">Owl Me!</font>]])</sup> 17:03, February 23, 2010 (UTC)
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*Definitely worthy of FA status, lots of pictures, detailed article with various sections and good referencing. --[[User:Margiechocoholic|<b><span style="color:Gold">Margiechocoholic</span></b>]] [[File:Medieval_Broomstick.jpg|45px]] [[User talk:Margiechocoholic|<sup><span style="color:purple">Owl me!</span></sup>]] 13:10, September 1, 2010 (UTC)
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*It was already in pretty good shape, but I edited some things and did what I could to clean up the relationships section. Seems like a pretty solid FA, to me, if that's still a possibility. [[User:EmmyG|<span style="font-family:Century Gothic; color:#a46582;">Emmy</span>]] ([[User talk:EmmyG|★]]) 19:49, October 18, 2010 (UTC)
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*I don´t supoort his betrayal, but the article should be NPOV per policy, and now it is.--[[User:Rodolphus|Rodolphus]] 11:08, October 19, 2010 (UTC)}}
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'''Failed nomination''':
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