Excellent read :-). Grunny(Talk) 02:21, February 9, 2010 (UTC)
Some preliminary objections/notes:
Can you add references for all the fields in the infobox?
It's generally better not to have references in the introduction as the intro should just be a summary of the article. I would remove the references, but thought you could make sure the information and references are included in the article body somewhere :).
This looks like a great article and I'll read it fully when I have a bit more time :). Grunny(Talk) 09:38, February 7, 2010 (UTC)
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