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Not Promoted -- DarkJedi613 ^(Talk) 15:01, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

First Year (3 votes for, 2 against)

• Support: Added quotes, cleaned up, added images, and new sections --- Hellabore ^{(Send me an Owl)(contribs)}
• Support: Great article, but it focuses a little too much on Harry, Ron, and Hermione, and not the subject of first years. But that's my only complaint.- Aragog the Acromantula^{(Talk / Contributions)} 19:14, 4 April 2009 (UTC)
• Support: ÈnRîcö ^{(Send me an Owl)} 15:48, 13 April 2009 (UTC)
  • Provisional Oppose: It has a lot of potential, but, as mentioned above, it focuses more on Harry than on first-years in general. Also, the events of Harry's first year are described in present tense. There are also a fair amount of grammatical errors, excessive linking, and no references. It isn't ready for featured status at present. Oread ^(talk) 14:45, 14 April 2009 (UTC)
• Oppose: None of the problems I mentioned above have been fixed, and the intro is much too short. Oread ^(talk) 18:22, 24 April 2009 (UTC)
• Oppose: Poorly written, not sourced. The entire section Harry's first year should not exist, except for maybe a paragraph or two of info, as it belongs in his article. Without this section, there really is nothing to merit anything close to an FA.--Matoro183 ^(Talk) 00:08, 26 April 2009 (UTC)

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