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Not promoted Cavalier One^{(Wizarding Wireless Network)} 09:35, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

Fenrir Greyback

• Nominator: Matoro183
• Nomination comments:

(0 Unspeakables/7 Users/7 Total)

Support

1. Very well-written, plenty of quotes, images; completely referenced.--Matoro183 ^(Talk) 12:11, 23 July 2009 (UTC)
2. I agree with all the support.--Adumb1881 14:08, 1 August 2009 (UTC)

   Fenrir Greyback is awesome; he is more interesting than the other nominees, plus his article is well written and informative and also has a good amount of pictures. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 71.227.90.42 (talk • contribs). (Vote struck per Voting policy)

3. This looks like a fine article. I'll point out that it lacks a relationships section. I wonder if we should add one. But other than that, perfect! QuidditchLover^{(My talk)(contribs)} 01:55, October 8, 2009 (UTC)
4. Just read over it, seems very good. Profiteor 22:09, October 9, 2009 (UTC)

   This is a very well written article, and I think it deserves to be a featured article. ddevans96z(Vote struck per Voting policy)

5. Woderfully written article. Deserves to be featured.--User:Slexie4eva

   I agree with all the support given. Lee7003 15:26, October 20, 2009 (UTC)

   I think this would be a FANTASTIC article to put up. Very well written. Maybe a bit more on relation between Remus Lupin and Fenrir Greyback —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Grindelwald v. Dumbledore (talk • contribs).

6. --ÈnŔîčö DC^{(Send me an Owl!)} 01:19, November 19, 2009 (UTC)
7. --Very nicely written! TurboGolf 09:20, November 20, 2009 (UTC)

Object

1. Before I read it fully, everything should be sourced. There are currently a few sentences at the end of paragraphs that need references as do some items in the infobox. Sourcing everything is both professional and necessary for a quality article. Grunny ^(Talk) 09:00, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
   • I went back and sourced everything I could.--Matoro183 ^(Talk) 20:55, October 23, 2009 (UTC)
     • There's still at least two sentences which are lacking sources, and therefore could be simply fan speculation. One of them "It's uncertain if he was killed in the battle, but if he survived, it's likely he was imprisoned in Azkaban for his crimes." shouldn't be in the Bio at all. That sentence is written from an Out-of-universe perspective, and so would be only appropriate in the behind the scenes section, since the bio is for in-universe information only per policy. Grunny ^(Talk) 07:14, October 30, 2009 (UTC)
2. It's a solid article overall, but there's a few issues needing to be addressed. There are some grammatical errors throughout ("Fenrir Greyback's whose only goal", "Voldemort being prejudice", "in the April of 1997","specializes children", "actually go as far as eat"). The picture in the "First Wizarding War" section is out of place chronologically, but I think it would be suitable for a "Magical Skills and Abilities" section, which the article currently lacks. Also, I think it should be noted in the article that Greyback bit Lupin in the 1960s or early '70s, given that Remus states he was a "very small boy" when he was bitten in PoA18. ★ Starstuff ^{(Owl me!)} 22:44, October 24, 2009 (UTC)

Comments

Vote to remove nomination (Unspeakable only)

1. Unaddressed objections for over a month. Grunny ^(Talk) 03:32, November 30, 2009 (UTC)
2. Cavalier One^{(Wizarding Wireless Network)} 09:32, December 10, 2009 (UTC)

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